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Book 4 in The Cinderella Body Club series
Heat Rating - Sensual - 2 Flames
Contemporary Romance with a Magical Twist
Blurb
Annalise Gallagher wanted Elijah Burleigh. Plain and simple. She’d watched him from afar for months, her friends called her ‘his own personal stalker’, and then she made a wish on a magic pendant for a full-body makeover. Transformed into the gorgeous knockout she always wanted to be, she asked Elijah out on a date and wore a haute couture gown straight from Paris to his friend’s wedding.
With just twenty-four hours on the clock, her enchanted night faded into the morning hours and everything crashed down around her. Annalise harbored a shameful secret and Elijah demanded the truth with the veil of magic gone.
The truth, however, could destroy her fragile confidence and push him away forever.
With just twenty-four hours on the clock, her enchanted night faded into the morning hours and everything crashed down around her. Annalise harbored a shameful secret and Elijah demanded the truth with the veil of magic gone.
The truth, however, could destroy her fragile confidence and push him away forever.
Excerpt
“I’m so happy
you came by today.” Elijah’s hot breath teased the sensitive hollow of her
throat. His lips trailed across her shoulder blade, down her bare arm, and
Annalise almost melted. Then he firmly grasped her waist with his palms and
stared deep into her eyes. “I promised myself I would ask you out the next time
you came in. If I’d known you worked across the street, I would’ve made time
and stopped by to see you.”
“I should’ve
put my insecurities aside months ago and just asked you.” Annalise felt
vulnerable under his keen gaze. “I don’t ever wear haute couture clothes—this
is the first time in my life that I’ve ever worn a dress like this—and I don’t
want you to get the wrong idea. I’m not sexy. I’m not a little badass who wears
safety pins and skulls on her clothes all the time. I’m just…Plain.”
He cupped her
cheek in his palm. “I disagree. I remember the first time I saw you. My nerves
were through the roof, I hated using cue cards for my first tour since I hadn’t
memorized the information or studied the artwork on my own yet, and there you
were at the back of my group. A blue scarf covered your curly hair—it rained
that day and I could tell you were self-conscious about your hair because you
kept patting it—and a white and blue striped dress hugged your body. You also
wore a bulky denim jacket over it.”
“I bought the
dress on a whim but I didn’t wear it until my friends dared me to. I felt
uncomfortable in it, hence the jacket, so I later donated the dress to a thrift
store.”
He sighed. “That’s too bad. Memories of you in that dress keep me awake at night.”
He sighed. “That’s too bad. Memories of you in that dress keep me awake at night.”
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She made an impression if he remembers what she wore.
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Oh, yeah! Defintely.
DeleteThere's an entire lecture waiting to comment on a woman's beauty as equivalent to her worth--and too many women like the heroine, it seems, buy into it.
ReplyDeleteSo true. Real beauty is on the inside. My heroine does learn that, but so many women don't.
DeleteHopefully she'll come to grips with her femininity
ReplyDeleteShe does. She just needed a little push in the right direction.
DeleteWell, she definitely made and impression but she needs to learn self worth. I wonder if she does. Enjoyed your post. Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteOf course she does! :) Insecurities often get in the way, but we gotta rise above it.
DeleteGreat hook! I was drawn in right away.
ReplyDeleteAww. Thanks!
DeleteOooh, I'm a sucker for make-over stories, even better if magic is involved!
ReplyDeleteMagic always makes things better. :)
DeleteGood snippet, Amber. I always love a Cinderella story.
ReplyDeleteThanks. Cinderella is one of my favorite fairy tales.
DeleteShe feels uncomfortable wearing a dress? In her own way, she seems as offbeat as the pins and skulls girls.
ReplyDeleteYeah, Annalise is a bit kooky, but totally lovable.
DeleteI think he has the right idea, and I think her insecurities are what many women feel. I can't wait to see the part where she realizes she's the same no matter what she looks like or wears. (He's surely telling her that, but also saying when she wears the outfit, it's worth the view. Fun!)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Barb! I completely agree. Most women are insecure over something about themselves--I certainly am--and we don't need a man's reassurance. But compliments are nice!
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